Note to Beautiful Girl

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"Excuse me pretty girl,
But it seems you are all alone
I might as well give it a whirl
And tell you that I love you." ~Your Secret Admirer

Dear Beautiful [ Insert her real name here. ] ,

Did you enjoy the last poem you received? I hope so. It took me forever to write but I meant what I said. I asked around at school today but apparently you hadn't told anyone about the note. Do I scare you or intrigue you? Maybe a bit of both? Well, I'd just like to let you know that my intentions were never, ever to scare but certainly to intrigue you. Are you curious to know who I am? I hope so but it may be a while. I hope to first befriend you better before I reveal who I am in reality. I hope you're excited to know who I am. I sure am excited to tell you but also nervous for fear that you may not like who I am. Have you ever been in love with someone so much but were afraid to tell them because you were afraid to know how they truly felt about you? What if they hated you? Then what would happen? I really hope that you don't react negatively to who I am but knowing that I have to keep my expectations low so as not to be disappointed or even depressed, I will make myself believe that there is no possibility that we could ever be together...unless you tell me otherwise. Please, give me some feedback. I want to know how you feel about these notes and poems and how you feel about me. If you would give me some feedback, slip a piece of notebook paper with your note to me into locker [ insert locker number of friend here ], I would be ever so grateful. Now, please be aware that the locker you're putting your response to is not my locker. That would make this mystery too easy to solve. You are a very beautiful girl.

~With Lots of Love, Your Secret Admirer.
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AikonikBoy's avatar
You most certainly have taken the first step, and probably biggest, step. You go girl, I see this going somewhere ;D You have a lot of love to give, and I hope you get to give it. Good luck.